The Design

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The Feedback

  1. this is another good entry that doesn't absoloutely scream 'comic geek' to me. there's a lot of interesting elements at play here, from the progression of the dark to light and the way the character is contained in an inset. you must, must must get rid of the demon though. it just becomes too much with it. imagine walking along, someone is looking at you, and they see white circle, red circle, white circle, red circle. it becomes geeky. drop it and you have a solid design.

    Posted by bfowler Thursday, June 4, 2009 at 21:45:04

  2. I love this design, but agree with bfowler. drop the zombie guy on the inside. in addition make the little red patch on the back match, and u'll get something thats perfect. :)

    Posted by Spoon Saturday, June 6, 2009 at 16:03:11

  3. Honestly I have to agree, the Transmuter is great! But I don't see any need for the alchemist.

    Posted by JosephMoria Saturday, June 6, 2009 at 22:42:13

  4. works

    Posted by SidarJabari Friday, June 12, 2009 at 19:01:58

  5. Wow....... Just wow... It's dark and wooshy and really interesting!

    Posted by Krammarkio Tuesday, June 16, 2009 at 13:12:34

  6. Yep seems nice - nearly one that i liked from all ryz guys have chosen...

    Posted by Rotdog Wednesday, June 17, 2009 at 16:00:24

The Details

Melissa's Magic Shoe #3

by melissarapier

Melissa's third example shoe for the Magic competition